15. As compared with Chinese, it is rather a young language. (p. 30)

【問題分析】As compared with Chinese中的as完全多余，應(yīng)去掉。rather a young language存在語序不當問題，rather是用來修飾young的，建議改為 a rather young language。這種問題在書中多處出現(xiàn)，再舉一例：Subsequent changes are of small importance as compared with those mentioned above. (p. 32)

16. The oldest English language, supposed to date as far as back 300 A.D., is unintelligible to any Englishman today, to whom it would seem as foreign as modern Dutch or German. (p. 30)

【問題分析】date as far as back 300 A.D. 存在使用不當問題，應(yīng)改為date as far back as 300 A.D.。

17. The complication of sentences in English is developed in the way as a tree with its branches produced from their stem and their twigs produced from the branches. (p. 109)

【問題分析】as 作比喻用法時其后引導(dǎo)句子，但本句中表示比喻的內(nèi)容是一個帶有兩個分詞短語的名詞結(jié)構(gòu)，應(yīng)改為like。類似的例子還有：It is moving as the film camera so that the object or scene may be observed from different angles and the details originally hidden may be revealed one after another. (p. 210)

18. In more informal situation the configuration of the discourse is formed in a radiating way and the concept is diffused completely. (p. 129)

【問題分析】按照英語習慣，In more informal situation中的situation應(yīng)用復(fù)數(shù)形式，即改為situations。

19. In the classic English more than two hundreds of rhetoric devices are formed by borrowing from Latin. (p. 142)

【問題分析】hundred與數(shù)詞搭配使用時，不用復(fù)數(shù)形式，如five hundred；只有在短語hundreds of中才使用復(fù)數(shù)形式。因此，two hundreds of應(yīng)改為two hundred。另外，the classic English中的冠詞應(yīng)去掉。

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